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awesome! this is pretty good, i liked the ending - it's a good way to end a chapter
I have a question though, do you want feedback / critiques or are you happy with comments?
also you've got some spelling errors so you might want to go back and fix them up
good start! looking forward to reading the rest
I have a question though, do you want feedback / critiques or are you happy with comments?
also you've got some spelling errors so you might want to go back and fix them up
good start! looking forward to reading the rest